Wednesday, 1 September 2021
Bike ride
Today we are going on a big bike ride with our neighbour Heidi, she is in our bubble because she has no family close to where she lives. We are going to bike to the beach and show her the tracks were you can walk and bike, we will only show her were the starting of the tracks are. We are hopefully going to take some money so we can stop at the beach dairy. If I had enough money I would choose to get a coke and a chocolate bar and maybe some chips. Then we might go down to the beach and play with sticks, with the sticks we could use them to dig a hole and write on the sand. We will also go and feel the water to see how cold it is. When its time to home we would bike a different way then we get to see different things, and show Heidi more of Otaki because she has only lived for a few months. On the way home we had to bike down the long beach straight, then we went up mill road and across the Domain field. It was really hard to bike across the field I had to go into gear one it was a long way to get across the field. Then we biked home.
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hi kiara that was a great story have you all ready been on the bike ride and
ReplyDeletewas it fun also was it cold out the beach I hope you liked the ride out the beach.From Mihitaurangi
Kiara, you have put a lot of detail into your writing. What a lovely day for a long bike ride. It looks like you might have written it in two parts - before and after your ride. Maybe you could put your writing into two paragraphs. The first being all the things you hoped to do and the second, all the things you did.
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