We have been writing about a spooky house. we were learning to use describing words and speech marks.
Friday, 11 September 2020
6 comments:
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
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ReplyDeleteHola kiara this is Ben.
ReplyDeleteIs Ihaka a ninja?
Was it we or they?
Maybe next time you could tell us what color the bag was.
Nga mihi o te ata Kiara my name is Mia
ReplyDeleteWhy did you make a narrative story.
What is a narrative story
Could you maybe tell me thank you.
Kia ora Mia thank you for your comment thank you for the advise.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Finau
My name is Jake and I am in Room 3 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I liked the way that you put your own name in your story.
I would like it if you added more detail.
Maybe next time you can make the story longer
Maybe you could add more scary parts
Please visit my blog here
Mā te wā
Jake
ReplyDeleteKia ora kiara sorry that was my last buddy
My name is Jake and I am in Room 3 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I liked the way that you put your own name in your story.
I would like it if you added more detail.
Maybe next time you can make the story longer
Maybe you could add more scary parts
Please visit my blog here
MāJake